tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5941570810167582443.post4899120150548037559..comments2023-10-07T20:35:53.537+13:00Comments on Levonah @ Pt England School: Duffy ShowPES Blogs Admin 2015http://www.blogger.com/profile/00718590749281782598noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5941570810167582443.post-72489106074072174202015-02-10T19:02:13.229+13:002015-02-10T19:02:13.229+13:00Great work today Levonah - I particularly liked th...Great work today Levonah - I particularly liked the way that you and Toby shared your ideas and sentences.<br />Your first sentence has too many adverbs - by saying nicely after saying excitedly - you confuse your audience a little.Miss Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04742995282810482629noreply@blogger.com